Deviation Actions
so i was in a cave, exploring this relly old place, the cave is filled with water up to the waist it had debris floating all over, wooden tools, sheets, and big lumps of weird hair clustered together it's pretty dark but thre's some light now and then, like it's moving
then i find him, some guy, looks about 70, long white hair, in good shape. by the look of his wide eyes he's obviously insane and really scared i'm not afraid and i just want to talk to him, he tells me of a baby someone droped down here, he said he cared for it for a long time, but the baby's body was too weak for this place, he said hair. kept repeating hair still grows i tried to ask him how long has he been here, he said something about Zin Xao, some ancient chinese emperor he can't be from that time, then he told me of a dispute he had with one of his bankers or lawyers or something, he said he was still afraid of him, he keeps avoiding him i ask if he's down here too, he says yes, they cut him in half, but he's still angry then someething floats by, a head, long hair, chinese, about 40 yeas old, wears some traditional looking clothes from edo period i try to get a closer look, it's expression is blank, but it looks so well preserved, i poke it's skin to see just how well it's preserved, it's soft i poke it's one eye that's above the waterline, it opens up stares forward, then the floating head with the cut off body starts rising slightly above water and angry expressions flash on it's face, he seems like he's shouting, but it's completely silent, he keeps doing the same thing, silently shouting and furious , while it continues it's floating deeper into the cave i ask the old man how is that possible, he blabbers something in chinese, i dont understand him, then he mentions the hair again, point to one of those lumps of hair floating about, and weeps for his poor baby, then i realize all those weird hair clumps have people under them
lots of grammar and spelling errors, just woke up and hastily wrote it.
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